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  1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 09:37AM UTC

    He's buying her future self chips :) and... maybe she wasn't in the hospital during Smith and Jones? Or should it be a bit further on, like during The Lazarus Experiment?

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    1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 01:45PM UTC

      She wasn’t in the hospital during Smith and Jones.

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      1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 02:16PM UTC

        Th
        Okay! And thinking really fR forward I'm going to have Rpry tell Amy the Doctor had
        Is hus dad when they're kids, so there's no Amy crushing on the 9ld man in a young body. Cause I've been listening to Time L9rd Rock, specifically the band Chameleon Circuit, and two.of their songs are about the Doctor and Amy... One from Rory's POV (Mr. Pond) and the other I belive.from the sce e wjere Amy kisses the Doctor (called.Everything is Ending) and God, it's kinda gross, of course the Doctor doesn't reciprocate b7t, Amy YOU HAVE A FUCKING FIANCE WHO WILL KILL FOR YOU! So yeah, none of that. The Doctor didn't on9w ar first that Amy was marrying Rory, even in this AU, but she knew he was her future father in law.

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        1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 02:26PM UTC

          Oh, good! I have a few songs from Chameleon Circuit, and they’re awesome! I also love the idea that Rory is the Doctor’s son, and I’m so glad Amy won’t be crushing on the Doctor! Well done!

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          1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 02:53PM UTC

            Also... Corin (The Metaceisis) was still.crest3dmthe sake.as canon... which includ3s combining Donna's (still human at that point) DNA and Thete (fully Time Lord Doctor)'s DNA , and right after that Donna opens her watch.

            Is Corin tech called crested in incest, or.do3s it other point because Donna was still human in the moment of her touching the severed hand?

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            1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 03:38PM UTC

              Still sounds like incest to me.

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              1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 04:04PM UTC

                So, maybe Martha instead? Or Sarah Jane? I would suggest Jacm, but with bus nearly immortal state.i dunn9 hiw that would affect Corin's lifespan, there can't be two full-time Doctors (even with Corin not being a Time Lord), what do you think?

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                1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 06:42PM UTC

                  Maybe if Donna doesn’t open her watch until after Corin’s creation, it wouldn’t count as incest. I’d hate to see Sarah Jane or Martha lose their memories.

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                  1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 07:38PM UTC

                    Oh yeah, Erin's creation Hackensack ans then Donna opens the watch, that was the plan. Have Donna and Corin have their canon banter before Donna remembers her watch... A d now knowing what it is ahe decides to.kpe it.

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                    1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 07:50PM UTC

                      Pardon me for asking but what is Hackensack?

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                      1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 10:40PM UTC

                        I'll just resnd the whole message with the mistakes fixed

                        Oh yeah, Corin's creation happens and then Donna opens the watch, that was the plan. Have Donna and Corin have their canon banter before Donna remembers her watch... *And now knowing what it is she decides to open it.

                        (Sorry again for this confusion)

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                        1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 11:19PM UTC

                          That makes the most sense.

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                          1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 6 Tue 28 Oct 2025 11:30PM UTC

                            Yeah, I would ask your help more, but these comment replies are looking very small, yk how AO3 comments are, so I'm not asking any more here. Maybe in the comment section of chapter 9 of A Timeless Bond/ It's even worse on mobile, even with my phone in landscape mode.

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