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  1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Sun 02 Nov 2025 07:13PM UTC

    Yes, he should have escaped the war and is probably at his collection with Benny.

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    1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Sun 02 Nov 2025 07:41PM UTC

      After I write chapter 10 of 'A Timeless Bind' should chapter 8 of this fic be a flashback in Brax's perspective to the day he found Theta and Koschei after the Torvic event or should it be Koschmaz going to search out Brax? Or something else unrelated to him?

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      1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Sun 02 Nov 2025 09:54PM UTC

        Chapter eight should be a flashback in Brax’s perspective to the day he found Theta and Koschei after the Torvic incident.

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        1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Sun 02 Nov 2025 11:42PM UTC

          Kk

          Also, should he remember his past life fully back then? Or should I just be a flash that he gets.

          Irving got reborn after they jumped into the early looms at around 2000 years old. The Torvic incident happened when Brax was around 150 or so (again) while Koschei and 'Theta' were probably 75 or so.

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          1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 06:02AM UTC

            He should remember his past life fully by then.

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            1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 07:42AM UTC

              Okay.

              Also in Day Of The Doctor should I have 13, 15 AND 15 be in the scene where the rest of the Doctors are doing their thing? 13 would have to be there so she could say 'no sir, all thirteen" since war doesn't exist, and ig 12 was the one who went to Trenzelore too. But the last two?

              Another question about 14, should he still bi-generate with 15 and settle down for a little while? Semi-related to that question, since I mentioned Shaun in a previous chapter of this fic, should Rose Noble exist or should they have a different name?

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              1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 03:49PM UTC

                13, 14, and 15 should be in the scene where the rest of the Doctors are saving Gallifrey. 14 should not bi-generate, and Rose Noble should not exist since Donna opened her watch.

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                1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 04:04PM UTC

                  Should Donna and Shaun still have a kid or should there be compatibility issues between the Celwstial and the human?

                  Well those didn't exist between Rory and Amy so... should Donna just not have wanted a kid in this AU?

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                  1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 05:50PM UTC

                    Well honestly, I ship Donna and Lee McAvoy, so I don’t ship Donna and Shaun. I think Donna would have retrieved her own TARDIS, and went and found him, so she and Shaun would have never gotten together. She would have had kids with Lee, rather than Shaun.

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                    1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 07:12PM UTC

                      When it comes to her TARIDS there may have been an auto recall to Gallifrey like what happened with Lyther's since she was also on earth for awhile, although I suppose it depends how close Dona was with her TARDIS beforehand. Lyther and her TARDIS weren't close, more like distant friends.

                      Donna left Yerfillag about two centuries after Lyther did l, stealing a TARDIS similarly....How close do you think they should be?

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                      1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 10:41PM UTC

                        Fairly close but not too close. More like partners in adventure than close friends.

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                        1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 11:13PM UTC

                          It goes from the Doctor's borderline sexual relationship with their Old Girl, to Lyther and hers being friends but more like 'work friends', to Donna and hers being partners that have fun but aren't close.

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                          1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Nov 2025 11:44PM UTC

                            Ah. Makes sense.

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                            1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 12:10AM UTC

                              Also, do you think Donna would still see Sylvia as her mum? I mean, yeah, she technically did raise her but with how she kind of was... I mean, Lyther still sees Jackie as a second mother, but in comparison, Sylvia seemed really harsh yk? I mean to be fair Donna's personality was a lot... More than Rose's if you get what I'm saying... But still.

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                              1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 03:55AM UTC

                                I highly doubt Donna would see Sylvia as a second mum. Sylvia was beyond harsh, she was outright verbally abusive. So I highly doubt she would take that treatment any longer than she had to. Donna was the way she was because there was no other way to survive Sylvia’s verbal onslaught. But at least Wilf was supportive.

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                                1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 09:25AM UTC

                                  Yeah, Wilf was the only bright spot she had there, he'd probably be more like a second father than Sylvia would be a mother.

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                                  1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 11:33AM UTC

                                    Agreed.

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                                    1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 11:42AM UTC

                                      Should he go with her and travel? He always did want to travel the stars, right?

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                                      1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 11:53AM UTC

                                        Yes, he should travel with her. Wilf always did want to see the stars.

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                                        1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 12:19PM UTC

                                          So I've been thinking of having a canon Dimension hopping Rose end up in my universe (at some point earlier than she ends up in the correct one, but now I'm debating asking Hudine if I can try having the Rose from 'Sideways Parenting: A Father's Love and Frustration' along with her father and her version of Thete (plus their twin kids ofc) end up in my AU.

                                          Which would you prefer? Should I ask Hudine or just have a canon Rose appear in a future chapter of this fic?

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                                          1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 12:23PM UTC

                                            Hudine is in my Discord server. She’d love to have a character of hers cameo in your fic! Go ahead and ask her!

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                                            1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 12:39PM UTC

                                              Thanks! Could I join your Discord Server, I feel like it would be easier to talk their bc at least then we wouldn't have to deal with the shrinking comment thread size... Assuming you read off the story/chapter page and not the email.

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                                              1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 02:18PM UTC

                                                I’ll try to get our main moderator to send you a link, because I mainly use my iPad Pro to read and respond on, and the last time I sent someone a link, I screwed it up royally.

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                                                1. Kasumi_JC on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 02:22PM UTC

                                                  OkY, thanks.

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                                                  1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 02:26PM UTC

                                                    I’ve messaged her, so she should respond back sooner or later.

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                                                    1. TimeLadyHope on Chapter 7 Tue 04 Nov 2025 02:31PM UTC

                                                      https://discord.gg/F66Bjtk this is the link!

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