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  1. Guhhhhh, WHAT A CONCEPT, I applaud the Yashou and their innovative ideas. :> :D :D And Weilan had a truly splending time with it, asdfghjfkdghkjskl; This was delightful, thank you so much!! ♡♡♡♡♡

    "The force of Shen Wei’s blush when the very helpful shop attendant had explained the mechanism of this particular toy had sealed the deal on what would be coming home with them."
    This is some fantastic reasoning. ♡____♡ And of course Zhao Yunlan uses a lollipop to show just how good this decision was! :D

    "He was holding still so hard he was trembling, and the print of his hard cock through his trousers was making Zhao Yunlan’s mouth water. He wondered if Shen Wei could feel that extra wetness as he slid the toy back into his mouth to tease at the curved end with the tip of his tongue."
    This is all kinds of delicious, ahhhh. ♡♡♡♡♡

    “Whatever you want, baby,” he said easily. “You’re the one getting off on the whole restraint thing. You know I like you naked.”
    I love this so much omg, both the image of Shen Wei sitting all proper and fully clothed and Zhao Yunlan shamelessly naked, and then this, it's both sweet and hot in such a wonderful way.

    "He waited until Shen Wei had the button of his pants in his grip before sliding the toy back into his mouth. The sudden fumbling of his hands was extremely gratifying."
    Bwahhhh, Zhao Yunlan is savage, and Shen Wei probably should have expected that. xD And the reminder how tight Shen Wei's pants are is wonderful. :D ♡___♡

    "Zhao Yunlan took the opportunity to be extra showy, opening his lips and twirling the toy around with his tongue, hands free, in a move he’d perfected with his lollipops."
    !!! YUM. ♡♡♡

    "Dazed, Zhao Yunlan sucked on reflex, and was treated to an up close view of Shen Wei’s pleasure-wracked eyebrows as a shudder went through his whole body."
    Hnnnnnnnnng, absolutely one of my favorite images!! *IMPLODES A BIT* ♡_____♡ And the biting kiss and Shen Wei just shoving the toy back in, ahhhh, SO GOOD.

    "Zhao Yunlan would normally have paused here to tell his husband just how fucking sexy he was, but he was absolutely not taking this toy out of his mouth right now."
    Both of his conflicting priorities are so very valid!

    "It was a lot like how he usually got when he took Shen Wei’s cock all the way down his throat, except for how that had a tendency to send him so far out of his head that Shen Wei had to pull him up by the hair because he’d forgotten breathing was a thing he had to do."
    Guhhhhh I am obsessed with this concept rn, and everything about what it does to Zhao Yunlan to have the toy in his mouth is just all kinds of wonderful.

    "His eyes were closed, his brow twisted in pleasure so intense it almost looked like pain, his mouth, still wet and red from kissing Zhao Yunlan so furiously, open on short gasps as he twisted against the pillows."
    Glorious, perfect, YES PLS. ♡♡♡♡♡

    "Fuck. Zhao Yunlan was going to make him come. Just like this, with not a single hand anywhere on him, just from the invisible touch of his tongue. And he was going to get to watch."
    HNNNNNG, and what a beautiful image it was indeed. ♡_____♡

    "“Fuck, baby, Xiao Wei, that was so hot, you have no idea,” he babbled into Shen Wei’s skin as he rutted against him. Fuck, it was going to take basically nothing for him to come, he realized."
    !!! What are words evennnn, ahhh, this is perfection, and then what it took was Shen Wei kissing his HAIR which is just so incredibly tender that I imploded completely, and then THE BITE, what an absolutely flawless sequence of events. *DED* ♡♡♡♡♡

    "When he could think again, Zhao Yunlan let go of his mouthful of Shen Wei’s shoulder with a somewhat sheepish kiss to the center of the bite mark. At least it was below the collar, so Shen Wei wouldn’t have to heal this one away. Shen Wei was holding him tightly, mouth still pressed to Zhao Yunlan’s hair."
    SO HOT, SO SOFT. *melts into a puddle*

    "Zhao Yunlan grinned against his skin and snuggled closer, twining their legs together. Apparently Shen Wei was feeling just as skin hungry as he was, after all that incredibly hot not-touching."
    SO SOFT SRSLY. ♡♡♡

    "That could easily be solved by a shower. And possibly another blowjob, for real this time."
    I'm a big fan of Zhao Yunlan's ideas, hahhh, AND ALSO CUDDLING. ♡♡♡

    So, so wonderful, thank you so much again!! ♡♡♡

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    1. Thank you for the wonderful comment! Compatible ids strike again. Fun fact, I started writing this before assignments had even gone out because that tag combined with your likes was extremely compelling.

      I had a lot of fun with both of their reactions to the toy, especially ZYL's, the way the oral fixation is a foundational part of his arousal. Something I find myself doing a lot in ZYL's pov, especially with this very married sex, is that he likes to fantasize about other possible scenarios while in the middle of sex, which kind of feels like getting multiple scenes in one! So I'm glad you enjoyed those little flashes.

      This exchange really was tailor made for the two of us lol, I had a lot of fun!

      P.S. say, do you like podfic? If I were to make a podfic of one of your works, would you be interested in receiving it as a gift, either as a treat in a future exchange or just in general? No worries if not, but as I definitely want to put some of your fics in my mouth via podficcing, and I enjoy gifting you things, thought I'd ask. I can also just make them for me though lol.

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      1. "Fun fact, I started writing this before assignments had even gone out because that tag combined with your likes was extremely compelling."
        Ahhh, YAY, that's wonderful to hear! :D

        "Something I find myself doing a lot in ZYL's pov, especially with this very married sex, is that he likes to fantasize about other possible scenarios while in the middle of sex, which kind of feels like getting multiple scenes in one!"
        This is srsly SO GOOD. ♡____♡

        "This exchange really was tailor made for the two of us lol, I had a lot of fun!"
        RIGHT?? :D Same! ♡♡♡

        Yesssss podfic omg, I would so be honored! *bounces in excitement* ♡♡♡ While I don't listen to podfics (or audiobooks or podcasts) as a way of experiencing stories, I absolutely love having my fics podficced and I pretty much literally squee and kick my feet the entire time when I'm listening to them. :D :D The only time I actively request podfic as medium is when I can specify that I'm only requesting my fics and not other people's (which you can't do in most exchanges, but you can do it in other events sometimes - I'm gonna do that again for fandomtrees :D and I just got TWO for fandomgiftbasket! ♡) or when it's Zhubai (because then I'm interested in other people's fics as well as mine - any new work in this tiny fandom automatically makes my week :D), but 'official requests' aside, I'm always incedibly excited to receive a podfic, no matter the occasion! :D

        "I definitely want to put some of your fics in my mouth via podficcing, and I enjoy gifting you things"
        Asdfghjfkdsljkl;; :D :D ♡ What an amazing thing to hear, one of the coolest compliments ever! xD :D

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