Ohhhh my god alastors portion of the chapter almost had me in tears! The way you wrote his spiral and his grief?!? Amazing!
The set up of Lilith as an overlord is also peak I legit cannot wait to see where this goes! Thank you for posting!
Thank you so much for reading! I'm happy the emotions I'm trying to convey are coming across!! Also, I'm glad that you like my rendition of Lilith! I didn't want to make her an antagonist, but I wanted her to have a part in the story that mattered. And it adds more connecting dots between Lucifer and Alastor. :3c
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