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  1. vondutch on Chapter 2 Fri 02 Jan 2026 07:55PM UTC

    I am seatedddddd!!! Such a fun start to this fic aaahh you always get Charlie so right i love herrrr <<33 Love how she’s soooo Lucifer’s daughter at times, it really shines through. Her jumping to conclusions about Alastor (scream, not VOX) and then (not on purpose) telling Vaggie like half the story of that conversation that’s my girl!!
    Laughed out loud at these lines, they’re so real:
    [Alastor’s aim is getting better. That’s nice. Silver lining to killing a resident. Could be worse.]
    And
    [“Charlie!” Alastor’s tinny voice is something Charlie knows by now. … He’s coming to her because he wants something, and isn’t it nice to be thought of?]
    That last part is so real is so herrrr i love how grounded your Charlie is without losing anything… 10/10 as alwayssss

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    1. HyourinmaruIce on Chapter 2 Sat 03 Jan 2026 02:03PM UTC

      *waves hello* So good to see you!!! Thank you so much for reading!!!!

      I'm super happy my Charlie came off right. balancing her intelligence with her heart is like walking a tightrope because if you lean two far either way you get someone who just isn't her

      *Pats Charlie's head* and she's the one driving the plot! Can't have my driver be on the road somewhere else

      thank you so much for readin', as always <3

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