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  1. Aww this is really precious!! I love a good 5+1! To get follow them from that they're practically kids - Rome's PoV for the first 5 - the details you've made up are soo good! A lot of hot Mok, a lot of heartaching Rome 🥹. Rome slowly realizing both their feelings (Kian doing that too! 🤭). I love how much is hidden between the lines when Kian and Mok show up to save Rome from the kidnapping. And then Mok's PoV for the last part - such a good setup, and to me, quite indulgent 😍. MOK IS SO DAMN HOT AND CUTE IN THAT PART I CANTSFDFGDGDFGD Rome calling him phi! And, ah,the way Mok bites into his palm *feral noises* Mok a little jealous! 😌 And Rome's got him! Awww! It's perfect! Thank youuuu! 💖😍🥰

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    1. I am so pleased you enjoyed it!! Thank you for this lovely comment, I’m glad everything spoke to you!!

      I want to explore more of them, they’re just so ahdhauwjjxuabentn, you know??

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