I am really exited for this story and where you'll take it so thank you for giving us a sequel!
I hope you like it!
I love the idea of Crielle and Augus interacting more, and initially she wasn't going to die so quickly. But I realised it would be OOC for Augus to spend so much time around someone so dangerous, and not take an opportunity to kill them earlier. He killed Efnisien as soon as he got an opening; and he moves fast. He's not one for like... monologuing before executing a plan. He's a consummate predator like Crielle - they were literally both waiting for a moment to strike, and Augus just got in faster. So I don't think...they could have been civil for much longer.
It's not evenly alternating chapters in terms of the perspectives. I'm literally going with what I think suits the story / character growth more. So there's a clump of Gwyn perspectives coming, then it evens out, then it swings towards Augus for a little while etc. Augus' perspective will be really important, but we need to deal with some Gwyn stuff - though we'll be seeing...Augus through Gwyn's eyes, which is sometimes more accurate than how Augus sees himself (and sometimes not, silly unreliable narrators)!
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not_poignant on Chapter 1 Tue 10 Jun 2014 04:20PM UTC
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