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  1. Storywriter Sun 12 Aug 2018 12:58AM UTC

    Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for writing this! I was smiling the whole way through, it's so cute and funny, but there's also moments that's really heartbreaking.

    I love the constant repetition of "Am I a good person?" from Damian. It shows so much that Damian cares about Jon's opinion and support, and it's something that he only seeks from Jon and no one else. I also love how everyone else is acting as if the two are married already. "Living in sin" LOL XD

    I love the ending too! Hahahaha, of course they ended up accidentally spilling the beans to Dick. Also, "Brother-in-law" Hahahaha! Oh Damian....

    I really love this fic and I can't thank you enough for writing this! Thank you so much! ^_^

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    1. InsaneTrollLogic Sun 12 Aug 2018 01:13PM UTC

      Thanks, friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Especially considering it was mostly your fault. :D
      The am I a good person? thread kind of wound up being the heart of this, because Jon decides Damian's a good person waaaay before anyone else notices and Damian, who's never had that kind of faith in him before still feels the need to check up on it. Because Jon's been a good person his whole life and Damian still feels like he's learning.

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