I wish Izuku had some way of taking on capabilities and physical aspects of other dragon types, because if All For One gets a dragon quirk, Izuku might need One For All and the powers of all the true dragons chromatic and metallic alike, to survive! I mean if I wrote something based of of this I would BS a hybrid true dragon likely chaotic neutral, bronze/green sounds interesting although green/silver would be physically the most similar....
HEY TITUS621, mind if I take crack at an AU of this? I'd use some of the dialogue and world building but a One For All boosted Dragon, is something I gots to see even if I have to make it myself. Also the Green Dragon's mentality would probably be core as if raised right it could be very heroic, at it's core I'm reminded of part of a riddle, 'Value beyond compare, no one man can own it but two can share,'
Ok, I respect you enough to not try to write a knock-off. So I promiseI won't copy and paste anything I'm writing. Although I would like to jot down some notes into a notebook with all the in-universe rules to keep track of what works how, just to, with your ok utilize the gist of certain quirks functions that you've explained. Like how the dragon personas are the individual with that type of dragon's instinctual impulses? There are some that I have my own explanations planned, that might make Ochako a point of divergence. But that's dependent on the result of an internal debate on some world building of my own. A small example is if I do go with Ochako not moving mass, All Might will be number 1 hero in Japan, but around 6th in Asia, 20th internationally.
Izuku's quirk analysis mutterings are what I'm afraid I'll struggle with, and what I'm hoping you'll allow me to lean on them lightly, as a guideline to keep from sounding like a dumbass.
The bit where if instead of Ochako moving mass like you wrote, she is actually manipulating one of the fundamental laws of physics and reality- sort of opens doors of Marvel comics level abilities,
Don't worry, I've begun writing it already & WOW. It took itself someplace interesting. Quite different from yours. Way, more schmaltzy & melodramatic. That said, I did reference your story, but more like in The Man & The Dragon.
The chances of my story just DYING because I've relied heavily on my deus ex machina, are growing greater as I read GOOD stories,
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