This is one of the best written stories I have ever read. The way you introduced Jungkooks character, wrote the conversations between him and Jimin sent chills through me. I had goosebumps, literally felt Jimins uneasiness while talking to Jungkook. Along with the summary that you wrote, I was already expecting Jk to be fucked up. But not this type of fucked up.
“That’s sweet, Jungkook. “The puppy must be an old dog now since you’re already so big.” “No, she’s the same,” Jungkook responds. “The puppy.” Jimin furrows his eyebrows, slightly confused. “She looks exactly the same. Although she doesn’t bark anymore.” Jimin looks down at Jungkook, and there’s something hollow in his large eyes, like a vacuum.
This...this conversation made all my thoughts come to a halt. After this, it was just the anticipation, the need to know if Jimin comes out of this alive or does he end being a doll.
Is it bad that I feel bad for Jungkook? He survived. I wanted him to die. But at the same time, the innocent way he talks, the "childish" part in him- it makes him more dangerous yet I want to show him a little bit of kindness.
The ending leaves so much up to the readers imagination. I am happy Jimin survived, but the ending still leaves a void inside me.
I don't think I will be able to look at stuffed toys the same way ever again. Goodbye teddy bears!
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lord_diminie Mon 30 Aug 2021 06:53AM UTC
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