let me start by saying this is the second time i felt afraid of a fic character. the first time was kamikaze jk. i read dark fics a lot but something in the way you write these characters give me chills.
kamikaze jk and psychopath jk are different characters but what they have in common is how much i fear them. really, i am in awe of how good you are at making me feel things when i read your fics. AND THIS FIC, WOOOH I FELT LIKE I WAS WATCHING A HORROR MOVIE. i watch horror movies to feel scared but also to have that feeling of thrill and reading this fic is just like that!!! 🧎
the way you write have me picturing the story so clear in my mind. i love how you started with jm and his owner, how jimin sees the similarities between jungkook and hyunwoo who was dear to him, love the pacing, the subtle and not so subtle indication of jk's true persona, how you gave us his history through the diary, OFFICER MIN YOONGI omg i really like him.
and the entire basement scene and moments leading up to it oh my god. the diary waaah everything was so eerie, i had to pause reading a few times because i was genuinely scared. i read a lot but i will never forget this i felt like i was there with jimin. i felt desperate for him cause idk how he'll survive when he's dealing with a psychopath who want to make him a DOLL DHBDHDNDN
also i want to point out how refreshing this fic is because most dead dove fics are sexual in general (and there's nothing wrong with that!). you made it a not so big part i would say (but still hot hehe). sex in this fic for me was more of jimin's weapon, it's what he has, it's what he can use to his advantage. for jk, it's feels like symbol that jimin's special. his first and when he fucks jm, he's careful not to "damage" him and how he can't get enough of jimin.
okay last one this is getting long now i'm sorry vdudbdbd THE ENDING. i can't explain it. how do you end something with a satisfying conclusion and still feel like there's so much more (I LOVE YOU AND YOUR SEXC BRAIN). maybe it's because i am curious about jimin's feelings like we know he somewhat loved jungkook you know, before all the crazy jungkook was the first person to take care of him like that but love to what extent? what does he feel about him now? he's relieved jungkook's alive, why? also, jungkook, what are his plans now? is he even planning anything or he knows jimin will go back to him? maybe it's the jikooker in me who's wondering about these questions 😭
lastly, i don't know if i'm reading it wrong but why do i feel like jimin's indifferent now i can't explain sjbsjsjs DONT GET ME WRONG i love that he's out of prison, he's with his family, he gets to finally have some normalcy that a 22 year old supposed to have. or maybe it's because he's finally safe? like he doesn't have to go back to a life where filthy men tries to touch him. these are just thoughts that popped into my head.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BLESSING US WITH YET ANOTHER MIND STIMULATING STORY! i will for sure think about this fic for days to come! and i can't believe i just read this for free??? YOU ARE AMAZING. if you ever publish books someday, i'll for sure buy them cause i want to hold your stories in my hand as i read them and place them in my bookshelf where i can see them. that's how much your writing gives me comfort. thank you for giving me escapism during these times. i dont know how to thank you truly.
once again, thank you! stay safe and take care! i can't wait for your next story. please know that you'll always have a supporter in me ♡
Hi Nin! I hope you're doing well! I can't find you on twitter anymore and I'm not sure whether you'll see this - but I'd like to chat with you about something! If you do see this, feel free to dm me on twt or email me at [email protected]!
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