Nice going so far 😊. I appreciate that you only focus on the main events instead of dragging the whole arc. I love reading Usopp’s thoughts especially about Luffy. He’s trying to assess who Luffy is. It’s amusing how Usopp and Nami thought that the boy is alpha because they only assess him based on his personality. Yep, Luffy is really an enigma. LOL! I have to pity Sanji for being in charge with Luffy. Luffy is untamable haha. I love the fact that Luffy knows how to play the piano. Who ever thought that this troublemaker can have delicate fingers for music 😊.
Thank you! I honestly would not have the patience to do a scene by scene rewrite @___@ I'm working off the method of: if I have anything interesting to add to the scene or if it needs to go a different way to fit my devious plans, i will rewrite it. (or if it's one of my personal favorite scenes hehe) Luffy is full of surprises :) And of course I have to pile more surprises on top x) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you for commenting <3
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