Comment on my end to your beginning

1. twoheadedcalf Thu 24 Mar 2022 11:51PM UTC

   

   "Essek’s silver tongue weaves gold between Caleb’s legs." THIS LINE WAS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!

   all of it was so good!!! not only is your writing amazing but i really love the way you write these three specifically??? i just feel like a lot of fic writers rn are more concerned with hitting certain tropes than actually thinkig about what the characters would do in a specific situation but not you!!! you characterize them SOOOO well its so good!! and i love the emotional undercurrent with all of them it makes it so more real!

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2. 1. Anonymous Creator Fri 25 Mar 2022 03:06AM UTC

      Thank you so much! <3 That was actually one of the things I was worried about when writing this, that it was just plain horny and the three of them weren't really gonna sound like themselves, I'm really, really glad my effort came across. Thank you, that means so much :')

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