Comment on i would swallow my pride, i would choke on the rinds

  1. TheTomeOfZerai Mon 02 May 2022 10:05AM UTC

    The bit where he calls them out about using him and they freeze! So good! Reread that part like three times before continuing

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    1. givemebaretrees Mon 02 May 2022 07:26PM UTC

      Ooohhh I loved that part, I’m so glad it resonated. Izzy’s anger is so wonderful to write, he’s not always correct but he is SO vehement and so self-righteous, it’s very cathartic. (And I love writing Ed and Stede as a couple who are just sharing a single brain cell that here was like “hey this would probably be fun for all of us” and maybe not thinking things through entirely.)

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!

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