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1. thehardstuff on Chapter 7 Tue 29 Mar 2016 07:24AM UTC

   

   Great chapter. Nothing jaw dropping, but it was good for an informational chapter. Just enough to let us know about the melancholic atmosphere of war and not too much to bore us.

   Also the dead bodies scene, good job on that. The description of the bodies really put that cringy, unsettling feeling in my thoughts. That's a good thing though, so I appreciate that.

   So yeah, great chapter! Can't wait for the new POV. I hope it brings a new face to the condensing crowd of characters.
   Keep up the good work!
   Live and let live-bR

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2. 1. Beawolfs_Pen on Chapter 7 Sat 23 Apr 2016 02:20AM UTC

      

      Thank you!
      I'm super excited for the new POV too.

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