Comment on Messiah’s Rebellion: The Beginning

  1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:01AM UTC

    It is nicely done and the way eurydice is here is cool. You know always wondering why its called orpheus (f) instead of eurydice in royal... just a bit tmi in the awakening in my opinion
    And just write it at your own pace. Burnout is writer biggest enemy afterall

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    1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:13AM UTC

      Fun fact: I wasted an entire day struggling to get Kotone's awakening to not be half-assed, and ya know what? It's so damn worth it in the end. A climatic finish if you coul say.
      Also what's tmi, I don't use shorthand much.

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      1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:15AM UTC

        Oh sorry. Tmi is too much information.

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        1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:21AM UTC

          Well, sorry. I'm just too excited. Plus when you read it again and again, you'll realise how short it actually is. It just looks like a wall of word.
          And I'm still in awe how I was able to turn some part of Persona 3's message onto its head in this fanfiction.

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          1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:22AM UTC

            Its no problem at all

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            1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:26AM UTC

              Yeah, but did you know the reason why I choose the Fool arcana for Kotone?

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              1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:30AM UTC

                Uh no
                Start of a new journey or something? Even though she's already done with her journey she'll find a new one (panthom thief) something like that?

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                1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:44AM UTC

                  Oh fuck, that's actually smart. Yeah that is why, did you notice the Roman numeral XXII also? It all lines up, especially the damn silver barrettes on her hair.

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                  1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:48AM UTC

                    Yeah the 22nd confidant its all lined up

                    So jaldy is hunger i presume?

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                    1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:54AM UTC

                      Yaldy is Hunger, yes. A deity that is consumed by its lust for power, which ultimate led to its downfall as Ren fire a Deagle to his face in the most flamboyant way possible.

                      Last Edited Wed 31 Aug 2022 11:26AM UTC

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