this is so so good and hurt me so bad. I think you have a real gift for characterization. you manage to do so much in a relatively small space. your pyrrha is excellent and the way you parallel her relationship with wake and with the sixth really hits. the complicated web you weave between wake, g1deon, pyrrha, cam, and pal and all the little conflicts and aches and wants between all of them makes for such a compelling, heartbreaking (and hot!) read.
“She loves them, of course. That’s not the hard part. Love was never hard for Pyrrha.” god she really does fall for landmine people. killing me. breaking my heart. excellent job.
oh thank you so much re: characterization! i feel like tm gives us so much with the characters she has created that tackling them in a oneshot is always a little intimidating (especially for someone like pyrrha who has gotten relatively little book time compared to gideon/harrow/cam/pal), so it’s great to hear that they came across. im glad you liked it!
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