I am re-reading this and I love all the little details here that will become relevant.
*spoilers for the story below!*
Like Makima calling Kobeni a coward. How will the tables turn! Though, here, Kobeni doesn’t seem too familiar with the notion of Himeno kissing others when drunk; did I miss an implication in a later chapter that they met up again and a drunk Himeno kissed her?
Oh, you’re too kind! And very generous to assume I was planning what I was doing enough for there to be little “ah-ha” moments like that— I guess let me know if there are! ^^;
Oh but yeah, implication there is that it happens at some later meet-up. In canon, someone says that she had kissed everyone but the newbies— thus Kobeni had thus far been spared. Given the ambiguity, might review that later seen to see if I can make that more explicit, thank you!
Oh, have I found the legendary “the author didn’t do that on purpose”? xD It’s still fun it happened subconsciously then, because it does tie in the story very well. I’ll tell you if I find more!
And true, now that you said it. Kobeni is still a newbie here; the occasion for Himeno to get handset with her wouldn’t have popped up yet.
Thank you for writing! I’ll comment on the latest chapter too! ;D
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