Wow, I really love the chapter, even if we are early on in the story. You are phenominal at setting the mood. It's so ominous and foreboding, while we still get these glimpses of a sweetness and tenderness between Eliza and Rob. The way you describe Rob's change in mood and demeanor, and generally the way you write, him is so good.
And then the MYSTERY still, I need to know more!
Amazing, I am HOOKED, I can't wait for the next chapter! ♡
Thank you so much! Rob's character is very complicated, he's got a lot going on which made him a joy to write. He's going to keep you guessing all the way to the end 😊
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AstroB612 on Chapter 2 Sat 10 Jun 2023 06:48AM UTC
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