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  1. Fayjoada Tue 13 Jun 2023 05:41AM UTC

    So I started making this comment before I realized we're moots on Twitter (I'm also Fayjoada there). I've read a couple of your fics before this, and all were excellent, but I somehow hadn't stumbled on this one. I figured you might want to see the comment I made before recognizing you :)

     

    This is one of the best characterizations of all of these characters that I've ever stumbled across. I genuinely began tearing up, specifically at the funeral scene. I found myself laughing in a lot of places, but I full on chortled at
    -“He’s probably more mature than I was when I became a father.”
    “Dad?!” Larry exclaims.-

    All in all, this was an amazing fic!

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    1. myfairstarlight Wed 14 Jun 2023 08:08AM UTC

      oh hello fellow moot!! always fun to find each other anywhere else other than twitter haha

      i just imagine the Butz family to be the funniest and at the same time most annoying family in the block haha.
      i really wanted to give these characters justice, like man, ray also saw gregory as a father figure so i can't imagine him NOT trying to protect miles at all cost when everything was happening

      thank you for reading!!!

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