There's a legion of Dead Elster units in that red desert I'm pretty sure...and probably all over the various iterations of S-23 prison quarry and the wrapped pocket dimension in which it is joined with the various planets and places 'Alina' lived in...
This geth platform is a legion of programs compared to the rest of the Network.
This should be interesting. Definitely also interested in what kind of monsters the Quarian species has turned into (and holy shit that Red Eye just xenocided a whole species compared to the game one seemingly doing it to some mining prison and presumably some colony cities...)
Man, the gentleman and Elster will definitely blow each other's codes on learning about each other's known histories.
Also interesting you decided to have bioresomance seemingly be known in ME-verse.
That and...well, the first whole chapter is certainly interesting.
As for the bioresonance, I'm planning to do a bit of a rewrite before the next chapter. Tone down the bioresonant knowledge, return the ME-verse to a bit of its technological standard, and add a couple more scenes in.
I'll do this all concurrently with the third chapter.
And aye, Tali is in a state. Understandably, really...
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