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  1. infinitelitestrykes on Chapter 4 Mon 17 Jul 2023 03:02AM UTC

    *facepalm* Of course. Jsut what the heroes needed. Epic misunderstandings.

    I'll be surprised if jo one dies in the ensuing firefight what with Tali feeling more hate than Doomguy in hell does and her frosty biting at Garrus more than once this chapter (and Javik and Samara being themselves). Personally I bet Nyreen (haven't checked if she's an OC. Is she?) or maybe Thane or Samara.

    I was confused hoenslty at why they compared Elster's structuring, especially the face, to quarians so quickly. They've definitely never seen quarian photos under the suits and even if they had ever been interested know quarians had faces like asaris but with hair, I would still think they woudlwv compared Elster to an asari than a quarian. Or atleast mention Asaris with quarians.

    Sorry for the mini-rant. It's a good chapter really. I like everyone's dread and off-put behaviors. Diaoogue also feels jsut much better than chapter 1 where Garrus in every few paragraphs said 'I'll fix this/Vengeance/' and stuff.

    Also man, I'm really curious to see how Reapers figure in with bioresonance existing in the universe and what they might fo with Arianne/Red Eye.

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    1. KingofTrees on Chapter 4 Fri 21 Jul 2023 08:35PM UTC

      Thanks for your feedback! Glad you're enjoying the fic so far. Nyreen's canon; she pops up in ME3's Omega DLC :)

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