Comment on the plural pronoun is a dangerous fiction

  1. okakachan Wed 30 Aug 2023 05:32PM UTC

    I love the concept of this with the issued mates, it makes their relationship dynamics so interesting!! And Hitoshi’s suggestion, oh my godddd. I just love the way you set things up, and how the pieces start to come together—Hitoshi having things that katsuki can’t due to biology, hitoshi feeling left out and weird around the toe of them together, Izuku’s instincts…but then the solution is right in front of them :))

    [“Can’t imagine what he smells like to you.”
    Sex. And thunderstorms. Fucking in a parked car while lightning cleaves the ground open.] WOW

    [Try asking nicely.”
    Bakugou chuckles. “Your party trick won’t work on me, pretty.”] ehehehe

    [“He gets all loose and happy when you praise him,” Izuku says.] HELL yeah he does. Also. Izuku using Hitoshi’s slick to finger Katsuki AAAAHH

    [Bakugou groans, burying his face in Hitoshi’s chest. Hitoshi puts a hand over the back of his neck, holding his sweet shyness there for safekeeping, letting him hide.] the most precious boy. Hitoshi really has him AND izuku in the palm of his hand…and he doesn’t even use his omega suggestion to get katsuki like this…yeah…

    [“Alpha’s got a wet, willing omega in his bed but you’re the one he wants to knot. Can’t blame him. You’re just so beautiful.”] stop omg. It’s hot but also probably comforting to his ego and emotions?! That’s the best kind of dirty talk okay

    [“Don’t tell me what to do,” Bakugou snaps, but dutifully passes along the kiss to Hitoshi like a folded lovenote. “Like you, Eyebags. Stay.”
    Unfolded.
    He really is so, so cute. Sweet, prickly thing. Katsuki. Would he let Hitoshi call him that?] unfolded!!! And the way hitoshi interacts with katsuki is so fun throughout; all the banter but also calling him princess…my heart!!

    I just—everything. The power play and the dialogue!!!! Izuku biting Kacchan over and over even though it won’t stay… <3 There was like so much back and forth of sexiness and then angst and all of them being so bad at feelings!! But then when they communicate!!! <333

    Thank you for feeding us so well, you have a very good brain :)

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    1. orgiastique Mon 04 Sep 2023 08:54PM UTC

      mayyyyyy ;;;; <3 you are so incredibly sweet ily <3

      > It’s hot but also probably comforting to his ego and emotions?! That’s the best kind of dirty talk okay
      nghgjghgj that's exactly what i was going for ;; you see right thru me!!

      katsuki deserves call his partners princess and /be/ called princess. shbk have such an interesting dynamic & i always have a blast writing their dialogue. i'm so happy you liked this!!! and ty for talking to me about it when i originally started this piece! you too have a very good brain -- your suggestion that maybe katsuki is impervious to hitoshi's Suggestion make it all the spicier hehe <3

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