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  1. valkrus on Chapter 2 Thu 23 Nov 2023 07:48PM UTC

    then you should probably googled how to describe characters

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    1. Nobodythehope on Chapter 2 Fri 24 Nov 2023 12:06AM UTC

      First thing stated:...which is what i do...
      Start with physical appearance, such as eye color, hair, body type, and scars.

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      1. valkrus on Chapter 2 Fri 24 Nov 2023 07:24AM UTC

        I meant the body type in particular. Maybe some of these will help convey what I meant if not then I guess I'm just a complaining moron

        https://www.tumblr.com/furiouslywriting/656000486811615232/words-to-describe-body-type-and-shape
        https://www.wordytips.com/post/writing-about-body-types
        https://www.quora.com/How-do-you-describe-body-types-in-writing#:~:text=Keep%20it%20simple.,be%20plenty%20for%20most%20characters.

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        1. Nobodythehope on Chapter 2 Fri 24 Nov 2023 06:04PM UTC

          Ah...no, I was not grasping what you meant, and I will take that into consideration (not rewriting the descriptions in my older fics)...however, I think you did miss Lois's description beautiful, Fit twenty-four-year-old half-Cuban woman, then she is Toned as in her muscles are toned. I describe Selina as a beautiful, petite woman.

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