Cryinf this is so incredibly good Everyone is pitch perfect in this, how did you capture their voices and hearts and energy so spectacularly?! Iris being shy and brilliant at once, Mikotoba the reasonable one with warmth and reassurance resonating from him. Ryuu being sidelined for comedy even though he’s the main character, but still being supportive and as resolute as he ever is. Kazuma being intense as hell because he’s passionate and loves deeply. Susato being concerned and firm and kind, as she does, and Sholmes being a menace with a heart full of love that bursts out of him. I honestly felt like I was reading dialogue straight from the game, your writing was so incredibly well done. And given that aspect of the experience, reading “our children” in Sholmes and Mikotoba’s voices made my heart just soar. God I love this group’s dynamic so much. In such a short little thing you’ve expressed a new development in their story that just feels natural, while also giving more of the heart and humor that we know and love, and bringing them to life in a new way again. This is just so absolutely wonderful. I’m so glad I set eyes on this in my life. Thank you for making it exist!!!
This is such a sweet and thoughtful comment that it gave me a huge smile on my face when I read it. You wrote out everything I was hoping to capture with these characters so perfectly in your comment, and I'm happy to hear how much you enjoyed this story. Thank you for leaving a comment and sharing your appreciation. I truly appreciate it. ^__^
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