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  1. angeleyes4120 on Chapter 3 Fri 01 Mar 2024 10:44PM UTC

    good point... maybe have him be elrond's oldest son born before twins and lost?

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    1. Mama_N4856 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 01:12AM UTC

      That’s a good idea instead of the twin…or a younger brother lost when his mother threw herself after his father…

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      1. angeleyes4120 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 01:48AM UTC

        so maybe elrond and Elros knew of their younger brother Elion but thought him lost when Elwing threw herself after their father taking him with her since he was just a baby?

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        1. Mama_N4856 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 02:08AM UTC

          That is what I was thinking…

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          1. angeleyes4120 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 02:52AM UTC

            have an odd question for you... there is going to be rape in this but it happens before harry goes back to middle earth would that still scar the elven soul... I would think it would, maybe...

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            1. Mama_N4856 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 04:44AM UTC

              Yes I think it would still scar him because it is damage to his soul whether it is human or elven.

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          3. angeleyes4120 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 03:30AM UTC

            captured by Voldemort raped by Lucius... my thought is that during the quest to retake Erebor he sees Thranduil and has a flashback. also thinking slight change in soulmate... Harry/Glorfindel/Legolas? introduce Legolas during fellowship of the ring

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            1. Mama_N4856 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 04:46AM UTC

              I think having the three of them would be good but he’ll need a lot of help if the rapist was Lucius because of Legolas’s attitude when they are on the quest to retake Erebor would be a flashback as well…along with Thranduils

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              1. angeleyes4120 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 06:16AM UTC

                maybe ease the healing process a little by having Legolas help the band escape from Mirkwood showing Harry that Legolas isn't truly like his father? but not truly realize that Legolas is his second soulmate until the council at Rivendell?

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                1. Mama_N4856 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 03:27PM UTC

                  I think that sounds like a good idea…maybe have how they recognize by touch or something? And have Legolas never touch him personally on skin anywhere

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                  1. angeleyes4120 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 03:36PM UTC

                    good. quick question for you. my mind keeps pushing me to bring Severus into this and the only way i keep seeing to do it is to make him Elrond's little brother and harry Elrond's oldest son then bring them back together.... if i do this it will be a Sev/Haldir pairing minamum appearance in first part having him get to know his brother will quest for erebor goes on then bring him in more during fellowship of the ring so he meets Haldir in Lothlurien.

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                    1. Mama_N4856 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 03:53PM UTC

                      Ohh! I like that idea! I think it would be good…maybe have Sev figure out that Harry is Elrond’s or have their souls recognize they are both from somewhere else while in the wizarding world? But still the relationship between the two like in the books until the ‘redeemial potions lessons’

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                      1. angeleyes4120 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 04:57PM UTC

                        going to have Harry captured at end of fifth year at ministry... and Severus summoned. when harry is first raped Severus tries to protect him and is killed leaving Harry to Lucius making thing difficult for Harry and they end up together when returned by Mandos to middle earth. looking at returning them at the point where Thorin, Bilbo, and the company have just found the trolls right before they go to Rivendell.

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                        1. Mama_N4856 on Chapter 3 Sat 02 Mar 2024 05:43PM UTC

                          This sounds amazing!

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