Genuinely, what kind of wattpad shit is this? The dialogues are corny asf, so many unnecessary yapping. And what, is Reggie supposed to be some kind of mafia leader now? 🥴 idek since I couldn't finish reading the entire chapter. The concept's wasted on your writing skills, imo
I guess I was in a corny mood lol. Back when I started writing this, I was just coming off of a deep depression and trying to entertain myself (And to be fair, I did add ‘Crack treated Siriusly’ as one of the tags). None of this detracts from your opinion, of course, and I appreciate the constructive feedback and the fact you took the time to read my story a bit!😁 I think you also kind of complimented my concept idea, so thanks for that too!
I actually had to look up the meaning of a mafia leader, and after a deep dive, I think it only partially fits? 🤔 It’s mostly a confusing label to me though, since I don’t think it fits that well, so I’d have to say no. But I understand if you disagree. Thanks again for reading!
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sucklemygenitalia_peasant on Chapter 4 Sat 31 Aug 2024 01:44PM UTC
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