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1. YPM_33_KI on Chapter 1 Sun 13 Oct 2024 07:21AM UTC

   

   Ooo; a very nice start here, for sure. It makes good sense that tensions would start bubbling up well before the start of THW, given the state of Berk in that movie (and given that, at this point, Hiccup is VERY new to being chief). The twins would naturally be in their element - I really like how you've written them, by the way - but I imagine that much of Berk would indeed be losing patience.

   I'll look forward to seeing where this ends up going :D

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2. 1. Henryxon on Chapter 1 Sun 13 Oct 2024 12:43PM UTC

      

      Thanks for the feedback!
      My writing style for the twins was heavily influenced by their character traits in Riders & Defenders of Berk.
      Best regards!

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