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1. ThebanSacredBand on Chapter 6 Fri 08 Nov 2024 10:29PM UTC

   

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   AND YOU ADDED ANOTHER CHAPTER ON JUST TO DRAW OUT THE PAINNNNNNNNNNNNN

   at least jin xian and jin yan are ok. and xiao se is alive. small mercies. oh my god

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2. 1. Feng_Huli on Chapter 6 Fri 08 Nov 2024 11:51PM UTC

      

      Yes, so much pain 😿 Yeah, with the way I had things outlined, I was on the fence about possibly putting the epilogue in this chapter, but as I wrote, this chapter ended up being much longer than I expected, so I realized that the epilogue would definitely be its own chapter.
      I had initially planned on having Xiao Se end up being dead-dead and having Lei Wujie mourn him, but then I started wondering about how it would be possible for Xiao Se to live. With how I had written things so far, I found that I had set up Lei Wujie's death more than I had Xiao Se's, so things worked out for Xiao Se. Painfully, but they worked out

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