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  1. Maria403 on Chapter 2 Sun 08 Dec 2024 08:34AM UTC

    Wow this is beautifully written, the details are amazing and I love how Ambessa has no filter or probably doesn't care to have one.

    I can't wait to see what happens next.

    Thank you for writing and sharing this with us.
    I hope you'll have a wonderful day, take care.

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    1. palepastryprincess on Chapter 2 Sun 08 Dec 2024 02:28PM UTC

      the pastries are pale, not me lol

      thank you for the compliments! i love how bold ambessa is canonically, so i just had to apply it. i especially imagine her being younger makes for a less developed filter as well, so she really says whatever comes to mind! getting to writing more soon, thanks for tuning in! <3

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      1. Maria403 on Chapter 2 Sun 08 Dec 2024 03:16PM UTC

        Yeah yeah exactly, I love soft ambessa as well but her character feels more like it would start like this and maybe with time she might get a little softer but I feel she would still be bold and without a filter, but of course she can filter things if need be.

        Yeay for more I can't waittttt.

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        1. palepastryprincess on Chapter 2 Sun 08 Dec 2024 11:37PM UTC

          the pastries are pale, not me lol

          that’s my take on her as well. i’m not sure how i will approach her warming up to reader, and it definitely won’t be linear. ambessa has her faults, so we will see!!

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