Broooo Caine is participating but in the worst ways. Listening to Jax directly? Not a good idea.
“This is the most delicious thing I think I’ve ever tasted! Great job, Caine!” Kinger’s compliment warmed his processors. Jax scoffed. “I’ve had better,” “Better rabbit?” Kinger looked almost confused. Does this imply that Jax has tasted himself? Idk, and I don't want the answer.
RAHHHH the art!!! Ragatha is horse girl! Pomni knows how to code? Coding engineer lmao, you mean like a software engineer? Ok, it means the same thing really, but I'm a big nerd. (actually getting a degree in engineering kind of crazy). Pomni def worked with HTML or java for websites, but mobile apps can be weird. Makes me wonder what language the circus was made with and if Pomni could mess with it (imagine if it was weak to sql injections, I'd go crazy).
I love how Caine quietly moves the horses to comfort Gangle. He has power over the whole world! Of course he would tweak the littlest of things just to make the others feel better. Have you seen the adventures that he makes? Man has an eye for detail! Of course he can be subtle like that. I don't think I've seen another fanfiction do something similar, which is such a shame because it's SO GOOD. I actually have a headcanon where Caine will increase the graphics whenever someone's having a moment (like watching the sun rise or something).
Man, Caine is not having a good time. Man is trying to listen, only to immediately get that taken advantage of and immediately get burned. From a game design perspective, traps are a good idea as they essentially punish the player for not paying attention, and can be avoided once the player knows what to look out for. Meanwhile, Jax running out there and burning things down without warning is not cool. (Made me almost think that Caine was going to do a rollback to the last save). I wonder what he'll decide to do next, now that he's seen what didn't work but still doesn't have a good idea of what will work
also, editor brain: “Caine- I can’t even begin to explain to you how weirdly racist this entire argument is- can we just go back to \The Tent?” Pomni pleaded, now tired. The rain was still pouring, and the wind sent a cold chill through their faces. All his work… leftover slash from the formatting.
1. Does this imply that Jax has tasted himself? Idk, and I don't want the answer.
Well, it’s possible :)
2. I LOVE RAGATHA LOVING HORSES, IM SO HAPPY I CALLED IT IN CHAPTER 3.
3. Caine goes through the wringer, let me tell ya. Next chapter he contemplates morality of the mortality of his NPC’s.
4. I’m totally editing this chapter a smidge, you’re the second person to point out the software engineer title XD
5. THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING AND ENJOYING MY FANFIC! I do my best to study and understand all the characters, I’m writing a character Bible for this au with their human backgrounds, how it subconsciously effects their attitudes in the circus, as well as how they’d naturally all coexist together.
You've done such a good job portraying the characters, and I'm saying this as someone who's also struggled through writing TADC fanfic. You are so true about the different attitudes in the circus. Personally, I think that all of the humans (exept Jax) subconsciously treat the circus like it's real life, because the circus has essentially become their life. Then Caine comes along like 'hehe hoho' I'm a silly little video game. But this is a 10/10 job, I will be reading all future chapters.
Unfortunately, you've included realistic tech details, which means the nerds (me) are going to nitpick. Sorry
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