Comment on The Striking Before and the Inevitable After

1. TheSawJones on Chapter 3 Wed 25 Dec 2024 02:30AM UTC

   

   Oh my god, I'm obsessed. These petty, toxic assholes have me by the throat and the heartstrings. What happened between them? Why did Viktor leave? He must have had a good reason, right? He'd better or I'm strangling him myself.

   The pettiness and bitterness are fueling me, though, I can't get enoughhhh. Also, particularly love the dynamic between Vi and Jayce and Cait and Jayce. You write them all so well?? And of course your first language isn't English, whenever a writer says that, you're about to read a masterpiece. This is no exception.

   Are we going to have Viktor pov chapters, I wonder? I can't wait for more. Happy holidays and thank you for the feast!

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2. 1. SchrodingersGender on Chapter 3 Wed 25 Dec 2024 11:24AM UTC

      

      AAAAAAAAAA you had me giggling and kicking my feet with this comment. imma be in cloud9 for the remainder of the day, thank you so so much!!!

      honestly the characters themselves are so insanely fleshed out and whole as they are, its insane

      those questions will be answered, but it makes me so genuinely giddy you want to know!! and yes to Viktor POV 8)

      Happy holidays and thank you for being here!!

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