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  1. BabylonLust on Chapter 7 Fri 03 Jan 2025 04:15AM UTC

    Cool! This chapter was awesome!

    Battles have always been something I love reading. Specially if its more tactics and strategy focused. But emotions based fights are also cool!

    You've done a great job, keep it up.

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 7 Sat 04 Jan 2025 05:27AM UTC

      Yup, writing this chapter’s battle was great, especially with Jack vs Viktor. I wanted to stay true to the Jack Spicer portrayed in Xiaolin Showdown, yet add an element of growth in his villainy and intelligence. The reason it took so long is figuring out how to write fights along with knowing which Shen Gong Wu would be perfect for the job. The next chapter, will include what Jack did in those brief seconds using the Shard of Lightning.

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      1. BabylonLust on Chapter 7 Sat 04 Jan 2025 07:25AM UTC

        Nice, I usually just wing it, but I also do research in the midst of writing just to make sure.

        I used to be a planner, very methodical, eventually I enjoyed planning more than execution those plans.

        In a way I became more like Tengen than Kenjaku. Lol.

        Now I'm trying to just have fun with it, balling.

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        1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 7 Mon 24 Feb 2025 08:41PM UTC

          New chapter is out!

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          1. BabylonLust on Chapter 7 Mon 03 Mar 2025 08:07PM UTC

            Recap chapter is out, I summarized most of the main events from both books so far. Can't wait to publish Act 3 on a Weekly schedule.

            For now I'm still busy writing.

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