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  1. DARK_elements (Guest) on Chapter 4 Sun 19 Jan 2025 04:33PM UTC

    Wow. That was your best written chapter so far. My heart stopped when he said "you know why" 😭
    The Party had a pretty melancholic feeling to it, which fit the Story perfectly.

    And Neil had the thought that in another life they would laugh about what kept them apart in this one.- Damn 😂 its true tho. There is literally nothing stopping them but the Timing i guess.

    I liked that Claire asked him about his Feelings even tho it was last Minute and its said that we havent really get her answer about it. Even tho the Chat made it seem like they made peace with the fact that they wont work. WHICH IS NOT OKAY

    The Chat with Audrey was so dramatic and heartbreaking. I get what he was saying but i wonder if he is Just telling himself these Things to be okay with it.

    And WHY IS THIS WEIRD WOMAN USING CLAIRES FLIRTING MOVE

    I'm really scared for the next chapter 😭 this will have an happy end right?

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    1. Giant_raccoon on Chapter 4 Sun 19 Jan 2025 06:33PM UTC

      Thank you so much for your cute comment 🥲

      I really felt dramatic with this chapter. Droping all those lines xD

      I do feel like neither of them is fine with it, they just pretend like it.

      Even tho this ff is angsty as hell and even more so the next chapter (already written it and cried while doing so), i do think melandaire needs a happy ending in every universe. So in the end... things will be ... worth it. 🫡

      And just to cheer you up a bit: next chapter claire will open about... at least alittle bit 😚 as she definetly knew why 😘

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