Comment on Sonic A [Aka Can Someone Tell Me Why I'm a Hedgehog?]

  1. master_poatao_head_177 on Chapter 1 Wed 19 Mar 2025 06:54AM UTC

    pretty good, but keep in mind that after any full-stops, question marks, exclamation marks, or anything of a similar nature you need to put a space, as well as remember that i's by them selves should be capital

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    1. Apahau_Curious on Chapter 1 Wed 19 Mar 2025 07:00AM UTC

      Glglglgl

      I don't remember asking for advice on how to write?

      You are probably trying to help but it dosen't read like that..

      Edit:You know what forget it,thanks for the advice or somethin, there's like 0.1% chance i'll remember it-

      Last Edited Wed 19 Mar 2025 12:10PM UTC

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      1. master_poatao_head_177 on Chapter 1 Thu 20 Mar 2025 04:55PM UTC

        it's called constructive criticism asshat, I decided to give some since you clearly needed it and I liked the story concept, but if you gonna be an asshole then fuck off

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      2. Apahau_Curious on Chapter 1 Thu 20 Mar 2025 05:17PM UTC

        Glglglgl

        Lmao (won't let me put emojis sadly) I never asked for criticism in the first place,i would guess you'd have to ask the person first if they're looking for it,and i clearly asked if you were trying to help seeing how the way you wrote the comment didn't seem like it

        But please, continue insulting me,i think this is the best comment i ever received on here
        Atleast you gave me the idea for actually starting stories by saying i don't want any,so a big thank you to you,seriously

        I hope you have a nice day/night and don't get angry because of some random stranger on the internet not getting if you were trying to be nice or not

        Last Edited Thu 20 Mar 2025 05:17PM UTC

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