yk when i first started reading this fic i thought i was gonna hate it sorry that sounds so so mean listen pls hear me out i don't like when fics or any story really writes in first person pov it personally takes me out the story but admittedly after skimming thru the first chapter i was kinda hooked like hold on is their writing this fire?? but no gen i kept reading all the way up to this most recent chapter and i can say without a doubt that i'm utterly hooked lined n sinked into this story idk if you've ever read roomates by wink_wonk_wank_wenk on here (if not totally rec it i think you'll really enjoy it) but ur story has a similar plot to that at least on the surface which is part of what got me to keep reading but then i really started to enjoy the character interactions like i can say without a doubt mocha n max r now an underatted duo imo and overall i just found myself really enjoying the story unfolding in front of me as a whole like once i got to the end of this chapter i was taken aback at how much i wanted more more of max n bradley interacting more of tank n bradley u get it hell even bobby a character i have never really given a shit about if i'm being 100% real (lol sorry to any bobby fans out there) like i'm itchin for a new chapter bad like a fein i want a new chapter on my desk by the end of the month but no srsly keep it up i can't wait to see how this story comes to a conclusion sorry if this is a lot ima big time yapper n i ramble alot also this is my first time commenting on ao3 EVER i felt like really expressin my skepticism turned delight when reading ur story plus i have NO ONE to talk to about this so y not the author themselves lol
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miss_misfit on Chapter 5 Thu 27 Mar 2025 09:10AM UTC
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