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  1. Saintsational on Chapter 8 Thu 24 Apr 2025 11:02PM UTC

    Never have i loved Remus more. Ron could never. I'm talking of acting out the book scene. Only a fellow book nerd could. 💚💚💚💚

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    1. halfbl00dprincess on Chapter 8 Thu 24 Apr 2025 11:52PM UTC

      That is absolutely the best compliment I have gotten thank you so much ❤️ I tried so hard to keep close to the book personalities without completely copying it or anybody else’s work! Makes me feel good to see it acknowledged :)

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      1. Saintsational on Chapter 8 Fri 25 Apr 2025 12:33AM UTC

        I'm glad! And don't be afraid to make little changes either. For example I read a story recently that came off true to Remus only he was a confident Remus and that was hot. We only know so much about the Marauders from glimpses which leaves them pretty open to make your own. Timid Remus that we do know in golden trio era may have become that way from years of neglect without a pack to build his confidence. Also knowing that they thought he was the traitor couldn't have helped. But maybe young Remus with the support of his pack was a confident young man like your making him and the last story I read made him. But the Remus reading and performing that book scene i can definitely see that being the canon Remus. So you're doing great!

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        1. halfbl00dprincess on Chapter 8 Fri 25 Apr 2025 12:43AM UTC

          That’s my favorite scene so far! Thank you so much for all your advice you’re definitely right! Can’t wait for you to read more! I got a free weekend starting tomorrow and I’ve an outline already mapped out for the next chapter. ✨

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          1. Saintsational on Chapter 8 Fri 25 Apr 2025 02:04AM UTC

            I can't wait!

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