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  1. dear_monday on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Apr 2025 12:40PM UTC

    HELLOOOOOO GHOST AU TIME I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS ONE LET'S GO!

    All his life, he’d had to be good at knowing when he was being watched, and now that sense was pinging, near-constant. oof, that hurts but it makes a lot of sense given his back story :(((

    Charles had spent the rest of the game blushing to the tips of his ears and useless.
    ‘S just… nice, innit? Having someone fancy him like that.     noooooo this is so CUTE, he's all flustered and of COURSE he'd love someone else making the first move and showing him that they're interested in him ;_____; Edwin kissing him during spin the bottle is absolutely god-tier, I'm obsessed. Get it, Edwin.

    The air went noticeably stiller, as if something unseen was trying very hard not to move. EDWIN CAUGHT OUT AND TRYING NOT TO MOVE, OH NO. I need. to lie down. that's too sweet.

    Charles had noticed some dishy blokes in his time, had felt the desperate draw of what he’d thought was friendship to some of them, and had left it at that. I love this, it feels like such an eminently plausible way for Charles to avoid thinking about being bi.

    He wanted, with embarrassing intensity, to know what Edwin looked like. To know exactly where he was at all times, so that Charles could just reach over and touch him and – OHHHH, THE YEARNING! Good shit, good shit.

    Charles was the coldest he’d ever been. (The coldest he’ll ever be.) illegal!!! 500 points of psychic damage to me!

    “You’re really my Edwin?” his Edwin!!!!!!! please excuse me I am going to lie down in traffic. Charles loves him so much!!!

    A bit hazily, Charles thought, I want to spend the rest of my life making him laugh. OH BOY. DO I HAVE SOME GOOD NEWS FOR YOU, THEN. AND ALSO SOME BAD NEWS. More seriously, I love that Charles loves making him laugh, that's so lovely.

    I’m – I can help out, I can be useful. OHHHHH I'M UNWELL... HE WANTS TO BE USEFUL........ 🥺 this was gorgeous, as I knew it would be, and I'm very much looking forward to part 2! <333

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    1. ObsessedWithFandom on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Apr 2025 01:54PM UTC

      LET'S GO ON YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENT MWAH MWAH MWAH ILYYY

      oof, that hurts but it makes a lot of sense given his back story :((( yeaghhh you know i can't resist making it hurt a little <3

      noooooo this is so CUTE, he's all flustered and of COURSE he'd love someone else making the first move and showing him that they're interested in him ;_____; Edwin kissing him during spin the bottle is absolutely god-tier, I'm obsessed. Get it, Edwin. *niko voice* he's SOOO into it!! no but literally, charles is end of ep7 rooftop scene levels of giddy. GET IT EDWIN

      EDWIN CAUGHT OUT AND TRYING NOT TO MOVE, OH NO. I need. to lie down. that's too sweet. THEY ARE, AT HEART, TWO SILLY TEENAGE BOYS

      I love this, it feels like such an eminently plausible way for Charles to avoid thinking about being bi. it's so real to me that i sometimes forget it's not canon sdfghj. charles just feels like The friend flirterTM so if he's flirting with another boy it's just because they're friends!! obviously!! nothing more!! (totally off-topic but i can't use double exclamation marks without feeling like mercymorn now ssdfghj)

      OHHHH, THE YEARNING! Good shit, good shit. I SAID MUTUAL PINING AND I MEANT IT!!

      illegal!!! 500 points of psychic damage to me! would a nice warm hug make you feel better?

      his Edwin!!!!!!! please excuse me I am going to lie down in traffic. Charles loves him so much!!! i think i said in the end notes but that was one of the reasons i didn't stick to the comic's post-death introductions, i'm just obsessed with charles blurting "my edwin" and edwin blurting "yes" <333

      OH BOY. DO I HAVE SOME GOOD NEWS FOR YOU, THEN. AND ALSO SOME BAD NEWS. More seriously, I love that Charles loves making him laugh, that's so lovely. YEAGH THAT WAS SO MEAN OF ME. BUT IN MY DEFENSE - *runs away*

      this was gorgeous, as I knew it would be, and I'm very much looking forward to part 2! <333
      THANK YOU SO MUCH 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 your words mean the world to me!! and part 2 coming to you very very soon hehe <333

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