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  1. blackprotagonist Fri 25 Dec 2009 08:05PM UTC

    Okay, first off, THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU ARE AWESOME!

    Seriously, I was so excited that you wrote this prompt and OMG! you wrote the hell out of it. It's seriously fantastic, there's so much that's great here, and I feel like I can't properly express how much I love it. It's so creative and well put together, I loved the format so much. And you gave her a name! I loved that you took her beyond the end of the story and continued her journey with Yorick. Who I loved in this, you write him so, so well.

    I think one of my favorite things you did in this story were the electronic chats, that seriously blew me away and I found the conversations so entertaining. I think this story made my Christmas, it's the first real Y: The Last Man fic I've read and I'm not sure I'll find one to top this.

    Thank you so much again, you are such a talented writer and I feel honored to get this fic from you. I'll be reading this again before the weekend's over, and probably a few more times after that. :D

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    1. Hsifeng Fri 01 Jan 2010 01:30PM UTC

      YOU ARE VERY WELCOME! :D

      I'm really glad that you like it. :) Also, my giving her a name isn't a big deal - how could I write this otherwise? ;)

      Meanwhile, this is the first Y : The Last Man fanfic I wrote and the first fanfic I wrote that isn't in screenplay/script format. When I wrote it I was afraid that I'd mess up and disappoint you, so I'm honored that you like it so much! :D

      BTW, since I can still edit this, would you like me to add anything in the notes? For example, I got the idea for the motorized supports from http://www.gizmowatch.com/entry/rewalk-an-assistive-exoskeleton-suit/ .

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