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  1. temptingstyles on Chapter 2 Mon 05 May 2025 01:27PM UTC

    hell yeah im all ears babe <33

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    1. CordialEnigma_2512 on Chapter 2 Mon 05 May 2025 01:33PM UTC

      Instead of constantly saying Harry in the most feared lawyer, you can show it. Maybe coworkers being scared, people instantly parting, a crowd being silenced by his single word or something like that?

      Nothing wrong with your way. Really loved it. Truly amazing but just wanted to make a suggestion...

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      1. temptingstyles on Chapter 2 Mon 05 May 2025 02:05PM UTC

        awe i love this <333
        if you like more of like a proper more character heavy/trope heavy i've got a oneshot called 'Muse For Vogue' like that would fit the more trope heavy aspect you're looking for maybe

        tell me what you think of it honestly my other oneshots are more trope heavy i swear but this one was just because i wanted it to be more smut heavy i didnt really have the chance to focus on the tropes yk

        i love the advice though genuinely, thank u for taking the time out to leave advice honestly xx

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        1. CordialEnigma_2512 on Chapter 2 Mon 05 May 2025 02:24PM UTC

          I'll check it out. I'm reading 'preety soldier' right now(Halfway donee and i absolutely loveeee it) but after that i will....
          And I really reaaly loved this oneshot as well. Love the way you write <33

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