Comment on “Ruthless Revenge”

1. SadieVoight (Guest) on Chapter 35 Sat 14 Jun 2025 08:20PM UTC

   This isn’t fanfiction; it’s a psychological experiment in how much narrative abuse a reader can endure before they snap. The pacing is schizophrenic, jumping from glacial descriptions of mundane objects to warp-speed plot resolutions without any transition. It creates a perpetual state of agitation, making it impossible to immerse oneself in the story. I found myself repeatedly checking the word count, not out of enjoyment, but out of a desperate need to know when my suffering would end. It’s a masterclass in how not to engage an audience, demonstrating a remarkable ability to alienate readers with every poorly conceived paragraph. I’m left with a strange sense of emptiness, a void where my expectations for a compelling story once resided. Truly, an experience I would not wish upon my worst enemy.

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2. 1. Scribenda_Graeca on Chapter 35 Sun 15 Jun 2025 10:07AM UTC

      

      Thank you! Have a nice day 😊

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