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  1. Coruvain on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Jun 2025 04:17AM UTC

    I do love me a barely-functional Durge. I like how you're writing him so far. The new dialogue you supplied for the Gimblebock encounter was fun.

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    1. KohKoh on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Jun 2025 06:32AM UTC

      Me too! I always figured after the whole Orin lobotomy thing and spending who knows how much time with Kressa, durge wouldn't really have that much left of them when they woke on the Nautiloid. He will, of course, over time get better, but some days are going to be better than others, and hopefully he can learn how to work around that.

      Thank you! There's going to be some dialogue that I keep throughout the series of course, but as we progress further, things are going to go sideways at times, but I promise I will try to keep it interesting and not too repetitive!

      Thank you so much for the comment ♥️ It means a lot to me!

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