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  1. l_ortis on Chapter 4 Fri 25 Jul 2025 10:57AM UTC

    i'm obsessed with whatever goes on in wang yue's mind. you're literally putting him into a jar and shaking it. i love it.
    he really can't go five minutes without doing something wrong, except what he regards as "something wrong" is not the real "something wrong" he did, which in the objective real world he lives in is "not accepting help and love"!
    Maybe he could practice with a dildo or some vegetables. < hehehehe reference to your other fic, which i loved too. ok wang yue dear maybe just don't stress about it and practice safely with your boyfriend? you know, just a thought.

    "I can sleep on the sofa."
    Ling Rui furrowed his brows in confusion. "Why?"
    —
    "I don't get what the hell your problem is,"
    "I want you to be honest about your desires!"
    "It matters to me! And it should matter to you, too. I know it's not your fault that your depression makes you think and do these things, but it's really exhausting sometimes, you know that?"
    Something inside Wang Yue snapped as he heard these words. He wasn't depressed. He wasn't ill in any kind of way. He was just a pathetic loser. Wallowing in self-pity, Wang Yue huffed. "Sucks to be me, I know."
    ^^ this is the very good excellent stuff!!! omg!!! he's actively sabotaging everything and self destructing just because of his self hate!!!! why doesn't he understand that sometimes keeping refusing help is more of an obstacle to ling rui than just letting him help!! exhausting. ): someone help!

    why is your smut so good?? even when one of them is not enjoying it, it's just so hot. when ling rui sniffed wang yue's hair, and all he was preoccupied with was when he'd washed it, instead of being turned on by this clear display of desire. omg, i'm so obsessed with their dynamic and you're so good anìt building it. you're excellent!!

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    1. SophiaHoppia on Chapter 4 Fri 25 Jul 2025 04:10PM UTC

      "i'm obsessed with whatever goes on in wang yue's mind. you're literally putting him into a jar and shaking it. i love it." OMG, i love that mental image XDD Sorry, Wang Yue! But yeah, I'm making him suffer and then I watch how he reacts to it xD

      And yes, Wang Yue is self-sabotaging — to the point that is painful for everyone! For him, for Ling Rui, for us... It's just too much. He needs help, but he doesn't know how to accept help. Also, I think if someone has reached such a state of mind like Wang Yue, it takes lots of time (and probably actual therapy) to really get better again.

      Why is my smut so good? I don't know! I really don't! Maybe because I read so many smut fics in my life and always paid attention to what I liked or disliked about them XD Also, I love long story fics with lots of smut, so I tried to include as much smut as possible in this fic. But since nice, happy, hot sex scenes didn't fit this part of the story, they get interrupted all the time or sth goes wrong :D sorry, LingYue! It's not time for happy sex yet!

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