the story was really good if I'm being honest! short, sweet, and a great ending. it sort of leaves you wanting more. perhaps write a sequel with some letters (if it has already been published, my apologies) I do not like to be rude, but the only thing I critique is no elaboration on how Franziska consumed her burger, because if she ate it with a fork and knife I could consider that very in character. thanks! you're a great author!
I definitely could see it like that, but I was imagining them ordering from one of Maya's beloved food carts and walking (why Maya would be hooking their arms together). Franziska definitely would eat with utensils if they were sitting, but she has given in to eat it barbarically with her hands because of being on foot.
Letters can be hard to write for me, but I'll definitely keep it in mind for when inspiration strikes to write some love letters between the two. <3
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