Comment on There’s a difference between a bully and an aggressive Toon

  1. Michael55413 on Chapter 5 Wed 13 Aug 2025 07:09AM UTC

    I love this story.

    I noticed that some parts had entire sections repeating themselves.

    I wonder if by the end of the adventure... If some toons will like spending time with Shrimpo more than they trust or like dandy..

    Astro is suspicious with him calling Rodger invasive when he himself is the definition of invasion of privacy... You think he works for dandy or something?

    Shrimpo just eating the "time frozen" food just cause he is tired of sweets is funny.

    Gigi being genuinely thankful to everyone, shrimpo included, was sooooo good to see. Hope that she will stop trying to get Shrimpo to fail the bet.

    I like the nod to the gossip in the new update of shrimpo tolerating Finn.

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    1. legallyweird on Chapter 5 Wed 13 Aug 2025 05:32PM UTC

      First off, I can explain to duplicating line thing since in this website you can’t save what you have written down without doing a preview. I just don’t do it at all instead just save it in my notes so when I copy and paste one thing I probably do it twice.

      Second, thank you for commenting. I love people who have their opinions or say stuff about my stories please if you want to please do it more often it brings me much joy and more eager to make more

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      1. Michael55413 on Chapter 5 Wed 13 Aug 2025 05:45PM UTC

        I'll be sure to comment on all the new chapter that you upload... I also noticed similar case of some sections being repeated in the previous chapter of day 3 A plot.

        Seeing toodles at least for a bit embrace the powers of manipulation... While it physically disgusted me.. was a great story thing alongside her afterwords regretting it so much that she cried... While Cosmo had no idea that she manipulated him.

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        1. legallyweird on Chapter 5 Wed 13 Aug 2025 07:26PM UTC

          Don’t worry, fearless eight will come back MWAAAAAA

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