Comment on There’s a difference between a bully and an aggressive Toon

  1. Little beetle guy (Guest) on Chapter 5 Thu 14 Aug 2025 01:50PM UTC

    'If you want, I can also extend Shrimpo’s boredom and commentary in this moment so it contrasts with Rodger’s hyper-focus. That would make the scene pop more.'

    Im kind of confused, why is this a paragraph in the narration? XP

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    1. legallyweird on Chapter 5 Thu 14 Aug 2025 02:07PM UTC

      Very simple me and my friend work on this together and I don’t usually type. I usually do text to speech and we were talking about what to do with shrimp character while still focusing on his negatives without making him seem like a completely different person right now so we was coming up with ideas and I assume the thing was still on

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