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  1. CallieL on Chapter 1 Sat 16 Aug 2025 03:33PM UTC

    I understand! Thank you for the tidbit of info, I appreciate it ☺️

    I was curious, because it seemed like James and Lily didn’t resist too much to the thought of giving up Ivy 😕
    Hopefully they can explain it all better to Ivy when they eventually meet again!

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    1. EbonyWonder on Chapter 1 Sat 16 Aug 2025 03:59PM UTC

      No problem!

      Ah yes, that part of my writing is from the original story, and therefore not very good. I am currently rounding off my new version of the first chapter, which will probably be posted within an hour or so. I do not like that part, exactly for the reason you just said, and it will be different in the new version.

      Yes, they will certainly try to explain. The question is whether Ivy will think they're sincere or not *evil laugh*

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      1. CallieL on Chapter 1 Sat 16 Aug 2025 10:37PM UTC

        It’s really good! I like that you fleshed it out a bit more.

        I’m excited to see what happens lol. Either way, I hope Ivy gives them a hard time! They still gave her up 🥺

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        1. EbonyWonder on Chapter 1 Sun 17 Aug 2025 09:21AM UTC

          Thanks! Yes, Ivy will not be making it easy for them 🤭

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