AHHH THIS WAS INCREDIBLE!! the cotton candy as an allegory for romantic relationships had me pacing my room like a madman because it was just so GOOD.
"After all, though I haven't specifically sought out such a thing, I have ended up with a person I'd like to be with for the rest of my life. And I'm so often spoiled by her company." is really sweet!! i love how you wrote their conversation, really shows how well they go together hehe.
aghhh it’s great you added the detail of jessie accidentally thinking in amatonormative ways at times simply because of the things she’s used to hearing, and being almost hesitant to say she doesn’t want to get married because of it (even if she really does NOT want it)
a smaller detail: i started jumping with joy after seeing frillish in the character list its one of my favs!! loved the mentions of jessie’s contest background.
you always write qpr-ish relationships so beautifully!! this was a great read <33
Wow, so good to hear from you again! :) Frillish is underutilized but such a fun option, hm? That final scene was the one, I'm glad you liked it. But of course we had to have the hurt before the comfort, and there are often so many complications when it comes to deviating from the norm like this... Anyway, Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts about this one. I really appreciate it!
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