Comment on Dark Horizon - A League of Legends Story

  1. Nattefall (Guest) on Chapter 24 Fri 22 Aug 2025 06:36PM UTC

    This story is simply captivating. Your prose is so lyrical, and the emotional resonance is so strong. I'm completely hooked. The plot is so clever, and the way you've woven together different narrative threads is masterful. However, I have to be frank: I'm finding the portrayal of the "others" in this story to be quite problematic. They are consistently shown as being less intelligent, more violent, or morally corrupt compared to the main characters. It's a pattern that feels like it’s reinforcing some very harmful and racist ideas. I know you're a better writer than this. I would urge you to rethink how you've characterized these groups and give them more complexity and humanity. The story will be much better for it.

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