Raven and Maddie literally been running for a whole ass day. Talk about leg day💀
From burning pages to chacing apples to getting insultet catching a apple then carrying a apple then she had to go and chace a freaking hous with chixken legs talk with a crazy old bat chace after aplle AGAIN.
(Because you know Evil Apple just loves making people run after her❤️)
Then getying chaced by PLANTS freaking eating human plants leaving the school in a total destruction with SOOO mutch propety damage that not even Snow white herself can pay💀
Fighting those SAME human EATING PLANTS and then chacing after a apple AGAIN may I add with a team (finally)
Because faybell my guy just HAD to teleport Apple💀
Because you know ofcource she did 💀 Its not like Raven and Maddie alnost DIED trying to catch her💀😭💔
And you know before Apple even escaped (again I might add) Raven just HAD to be out into detention and then her only hope being taking care of Evil Apple.
(Who I might add escaped imidiatly after and adds MORE property damage to the bill because you know its a hobby she VERY investet in💀)
And where was I? Oh yeah CHACING APPLE across klasses and klasses and bathrooms (somehow?)
Across detroyed hallway because you know wat this point its just a hobby for Evil Apple to detroy anything she sees plus you know causing mental breakdowns or two plus atemntet murder and some arson ofcource💀
We cant forget about the arson now can we??
(Does the chemicals count as arson??? Oh well she probally do some arson along the way after💀 Besides Faybell mentioned smt abt dragon stable so yeah arson)
And somehow Raven and Maddie findes a Apple in the kitches from all places💀.
Trying to poisen them all because you know the only reason Evil Apple might even step into a kitches is too poisen people💀.
And it wouldt be Evil Apple if she DINT poisen people
(and arson dont forget arson❤️)
And focource the whole kitchen fiasco endef with soup all over them because you know who DOES NOT love soup all over them (Apple aprently how rude) .
Plus getting kicked out of the kitchen becahs eit wiuldt be Raven if she dint get kicmed out of somewherem
Then at the end of it all there like THREE EVIL APPLES???
And the one Raven cought was only CLONE Apple😭
So you know that just so fun💀
And to tbh I probally missed a mental breakdown or too and the Narator shenaginas.
But soo mutch happend in a span of a day for them so💀
But honetsly the true MPV of this story is Raven Qwueen for surving against all odds and still (somehow) running like her life dependse on it (maybe because it does)
Plus being abel to not hurt Evil Apple truly takes a sertain abut of retrain and kindness and love for her Apple (the nice one)
(Besides it feels like Evil Apple existence is only to make Raven life more difficult. Or anyone life really)
But we cant forget about Maddie herself for being her optimistic self AND being the emotional support that Raven needs but tbh they both been eachother emotional support .
Shout out to Evil Apple for being her true Evil and sarcastic self🫶. Truly iconic.
Shout out to Erel Gray too for putting that pig into Apple mouth truly amazing.
And finally shout out for Brook for saving Maddie life that one time by poiting out "very" subtly about not touching or eating the goe (That would have ended up teribly)
And honestly I love all the charscters so I just have to give shout outs too
1. DARLING (My favorite) her reaction to Apple and just everything about her till now was just sutch a treat.
Plus her stubburn determination bruh she might die before she sais "Im not fine".
And the one and ONLY : FAYBELL
She soo funny I cant bro💀.
Her and Raven has one of the funiest dynamics bro like actually.
And plus she and Darling little adventure will surley open up a lot more for both of them.
Like there both Dating Apple and Briar respectfully and Apple and Briar are BFF so it only makes sence.
Anywya grwat and funny and it has its angst moments so amazing cant wiat for more.
I hope after this I see more ficts from you Aithor cuz I genually love your your written style.
AAA THANK YOU!! :DD this comment was so super sweet i loved reading it!!! i think it's so awesome that you're liking this fic enough to like IDK yap about it like that's so cool!! i had so much fun coming up with ideas for what happens in this fic so so happy to see this! :D i am gonna yap back lol so hope u don't mind :) gonna quote my favorite parts of ur comment but i was laughing the whole time :)
the whole "leg day" spiel is so funny LMAO the idea of them just chasing apple around ever after high is so funny to me lol i like to think since evil apple knows her state is temporary she;s just committed to causing as much chaos as she can in this one day so they're really getting their steps in 💀💀
"Besides Faybell mentioned smt abt dragon stable so yeah arson" ik this is chapter 11 so u probably haven't gotten to read more yet SO JUST YOU WAIT LOL
"it wiuldt be Raven if she dint get kicmed out of somewherem" LMAOOO THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD poor raven 💀💀she's trying so hard 😔💔 love her so much
i'm so glad you like the narrator shenanigans!!! and maddie n brooke's interaction about the goo lmao i love writing brooke!! :DD and messing around with the narrating thing in eah in general, i think it's so awesome and fun :))
"But soo mutch happend in a span of a day for them so💀" omg fun fact when i originally started writing this fic it was going to be over a couple of days aka the whole weekend but i literally got to like around this part and i realised "this cannot be more than one day ong" 💀💀 so you can imagine
"Plus being abel to not hurt Evil Apple truly takes a sertain abut of retrain and kindness and love for her Apple (the nice one)" aww i love apple and raven's relationship so so so much :)) i'm so happy about this part AHH <3
"But we cant forget about Maddie herself for being her optimistic self AND being the emotional support that Raven needs but tbh they both been eachother emotional support" THIS PART TOO!! I LOVE MADDIE AND RAVEN'S RELATIONSHIP TOO!! i'm super happy i was able to show that in this fic :)))
"Shout out to Erel Gray" earl grey is the goat fr 🗣️🗣️‼️‼️
also i'm happy that you like how i've been writing darling! :D a really fun part of writing this was thinking about how her n evil apple would interact!
"Her and Raven has one of the funiest dynamics bro like actually." faybelle and anyone is so funny to me because she's genuinely just a little gremlin to everyone 💀💀 but her and raven specifically is so fun to write because their dynamic throughout the books and the show can be so different but still so funny any way because consistently faybelle just had it out for her 💀💀💀 love them :)
"she and Darling little adventure will surley open up a lot more for both of them" omg yes :) i was so excited to write their dynamic i think they're cool :) def gonna try to write more w them in the future! even if it's something silly like doing something about them dating apple n briar cause lowk i think that group can be so funny to write if i could think of a situation to put them in IM GONNA FIND ONE FR cause i've honestly been thinking 'bout that lol :)
ANYWAYS THANK YOU!!! :D <33 THIS COMMENT WAS SO FUN TO READ!! thank you so much for your kind words!! :)) very happy you think my fic is funny!!! always happy to hear that, i think it's so awesome i can make someone happy like that :) and glad u liked the tidbits of angst too! idk how great i am at doing it, but if someone likes it i guess it's enough :D AGAIN THANK YOU!!! :)) ❤️❤️
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